Peer review 1 week 4

Today I have chosen to peer review Charlotte’s blog post.

Hey, Charlotte I just read through your recent blog for 19th Century Literature and I have to say you have done a great job of capturing what you have learned about slavery during the romantic period. You made a point on how this period brings the idealisation of imagination and celebration and worship of nature to the hearts and minds of its readers but overshadows the harsh reality of the times this movement was set in with slavery still being a very real issue at the time. Using William Cowper’s poetry you have brilliantly reflected your own learning about slavery in the Romantic period and I have to say I too have taken something away from reading through this blog post. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more soon :).

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  1. A supportive comment Daniel. Good work.
    *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    *You made a point on how this period brings the idealisation of imagination and celebration and worship of nature to the hearts and minds of its readers but overshadows the harsh reality of the times this movement was set in with slavery still being a very real issue at the time. – overlong sentence that loses its grammatical way…. split into two.

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